New and it works well,but has few minor issues
Hey there dude,
I'm a big fan of your work and I wanted to give a review that wasn't just a "oh cool" post. I rather enjoyed this new piece from you.
Presentation:
-The opening was funny and very nicely animated. It had a great variety of colors and shading, it really looked fantastic when the grey haired guy was overlooking the valley. I think that background showed off your artistic strengths quite nicely.
-The post-intro sponsor clip was a nice touch and helped with the overall anime spoof feeling.
-The character designs were well done and did feel significantly anime-ish. I could actually see these being used in a real show.
-Nice touch with the ending of the episode graphic and outro
audio:
-The voices fit with what you were going for, though for some reason I really liked the balding old man's voice. It stood out more. Also Rina-chan's altered pitch worked for me; It was lower in pitch than her usual anime girl voice, nice. Also Galacticamaru's voice came out nice, who voiced him? You or Toma?
-Music: The music was nice but I wish there was more of it. The lack of music was a bit too noticeable on my end. A little loop or two for some of the exposition scenes would have helped the overall atmosphere.
Misc:
-While I did enjoy this a bunch, parts of it felt a little slow. I can't put my finger on it, but maybe if a little more was going on that would solve this. Or maybe it could have been split into a second episode?
-I found the overall jokes funny, but adding in some other anime tropes would have been added to variety.
-Seeing a bit more of the bad guy would have been nice, though I get you were going for the exposition-heavy episode style that's focused on the mainstays.
Overall I found this to be a entertaining piece, it wasn't perfect, but it was a very strong effort. I feel that you succeeded in what you were trying to do. A little more variety in the "episode" would work wonders and it would take this straight to 10 for me. If you spoof anime again, it would be funny to see you tackle other genres and add other gags, maybe even bizarre commercial breaks could work. It was nice seeing something different than the Awesome series. I do hope you continue with things like this. I'm not sure if you'll read this, but I hope this was helpful. Keep up the good stuff man.
-Shockdingo