This was GREAT! It was so imaginative and fun to watch. I loved all the variety in the character designs, how they moved and their quirks. Great visual gags and stellar animation. Great job, this is solid!
This was GREAT! It was so imaginative and fun to watch. I loved all the variety in the character designs, how they moved and their quirks. Great visual gags and stellar animation. Great job, this is solid!
Appreciate it, thanks for watching!!
I really dug this! Well animated, hilarious, short and to the point! Great work!
I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Outstanding work! This was incredibly hilarious, but also featured great story telling! The visual gags, callbacks (hello Spidey Cartoon maker!) and villain was just fantastic. You gave everyone plenty to do and it was never halted by overly long gags or anything like that. The timing and length of the entire thing was perfect. Well done, I've gotta see more from you! Cheers!
Thankyou so much :D
Pretty funny! I like how exaggerated you drew Ryu, I liked how fluidly Sakura's animations were, but I felt it could have used a bit of editing to tighten things up a bit, timing wise. I felt that it kind of went on a tangent. Some of the lines could have been edited to focus on the funnier parts of her speech. A bit of music could have also punched things up.
Overall nice work, had fun! Cheers!
Thanks a lot for the feedback! I'll keep all that in mind with future works. If you got some fun out of it then I'm happy.
Not bad, a fun idea!
-There's some places where the animation could be touched up and smoothed out, sometimes the characters were gliding rather than moving.
-The audio quality of the voices sometimes was a bit too quiet and Hans could have been a bit more energetic and arrogant
-Pacing could be tightened up for the future; there were points where there was a bit of dead air while waiting for something else to happen and thins slowed down as a result.
Overall not a bad idea, I had a chuckle and saw good potential out of this. Best of luck with the future and keep on animating. Cheers!
Thank you for that constructive feedback, I found the notes really helpful and will hopefully help me improve.
I always loved these back in the day, I'm glad you've brought this back! Also I'm liking how you're expanding on the cast and adding new antagonists! Great stuff as always dude, can't wait to see more!
thanks!
Dude, your work is always a joy to view. Gotta love this totally out there and awesome concept. Never thought Orcs were so prone to drug use and non-combat fatalities hah.
thanks!
Pretty cool stuff, I dug the choreography! Would be interested in seeing where this goes. One question though, near the end, where'd you get that remix of Q's theme? Sounded pretty cool!
Best of luck with things!
thank you I appreciate your feedback. As for the theme, I honestly don't remember. It was so long ago haha
I have loved these things and this does not disappoint.
-Great art direction! I loved the explosions (and the cell phone poof), beautiful colours and shading
-The voices were all well done and memorable
Can't think of anything needing fixes or improvement. Great little short! I had a blast!...hah..hah..*cough* I'll...I'll just go...
Thank you very much! :D
Another awesome installment of Ragemelon! Really enjoyed this one dude:
-Animation, looked great as ever. The rebuilding sequence for RM's body was great. It was expanded compared to last time.
Art: Colours vivid and lines clean. The character designs were great due to how much personality was in each character's face, but I loved the expanded settings that we saw this time around. The landscapes were a rather nice touch dude.
I was expecting another quick short, but I like how you went a different route instead of giving us the expected Fruity Rage carnage. The puns were also fun, I do quite enjoy those.
Overall a great episode dude. Keep up the good work!
-Shockdingo
thanks shockdingo!
Greetings, I'm ShockDingo. I've been a voice actor for 13 years & been in several productions here & various indie games. If you need a voice for your project then I'm your man...a mechanical Dingo mask wearing man, but still a man of dependability!
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